tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8387848004817470107.post5862728765004485386..comments2023-03-31T11:44:23.286+01:00Comments on Rhys Wadmore CAA UCA Rochester: From Script to Screen - Forming a story #1Rhys Wadmore Year 2 CAAhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00073131067066063823noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8387848004817470107.post-62275051659864277282014-01-20T11:19:56.210+00:002014-01-20T11:19:56.210+00:00Liking the start of this idea Rhys.Liking the start of this idea Rhys.Heidi Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08431164921168465412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8387848004817470107.post-83044930349200782712014-01-13T23:31:49.838+00:002014-01-13T23:31:49.838+00:00but where's your story? This reads like a musi...but where's your story? This reads like a music video - spectacular - but, so what? Where's the conflict/problem?tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8387848004817470107.post-36951779881225502892014-01-13T16:27:13.464+00:002014-01-13T16:27:13.464+00:00I like the idea of the camera :) and I quite like ...I like the idea of the camera :) and I quite like the story opening, building up the moodAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01539979029576641402noreply@blogger.com