Reviewing my idea with my tutor has highlighted many creative errors and I think the main being that there isn't a sense of conflict in the story. The whole experience is reminiscent of a music video maybe good cinematography but the story itself is lost.
Also we overlooked the three words and I admitted that I tend to become generic when I look at 'Joke Shop' so now I am prying it apart and warping its components so you can see the references faintly.
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