Hi Rhys!Getting closer with the referencing... after the quote, you just have the author's surname and the year of publication, so for example, (Caldwell, 2011). You don't need to number them. In the bibliography, you have the info in this order - Author's surnameInitialYear (in brackets)Title (in italics)At (URL) Accessed on Here is the example from the referencing guide - Giles, J. (2001) A Filmmakers' Guide to Distribution and Exhibition. At: http://www.bfi.org.uk/filmtvinfo/publications/pub-repbrief/pdf/filmmakersguide.pdf (Accessed on 14.06.09) (The title should be in italics, but I can't do that in the comments box!)Likewise, your illustrations list is missing some important bits too - take another look at the guide to see what you need.Your last paragraphs sounds a bit odd... I think you could have incorporated some of that description into earlier paragraphs perhaps? Also, it seems to come to an abrupt end!